Journey Home
that was GREAT, you didn't waste a word, to the point, and with feeling. I especially liked the transition from working almost anonymously on the ship to the intimate thoughts about Diane. I guess we've all been there to some degree.
Thank you for the feedback. I was worried I was skipping ahead too much.
that was GREAT, you didn't waste a word, to the point, and with feeling. I especially liked the transition from working almost anonymously on the ship to the intimate thoughts about Diane. I guess we've all been there to some degree.
Thank you for the feedback. I was worried I was skipping ahead too much.